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Post by khushoo on Dec 14, 2006 16:38:14 GMT 5.5
Abhi to meri asali udaan baaki hai, Abhi to bahut se imtihan baaki hai, Abhi tak to meina zameen dekhi hai, Abhi to pura aasmaan baaki hai
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Post by anshupawan on Dec 14, 2006 23:16:16 GMT 5.5
very very beautiful,positve n upbeat, keep up the gud work
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Post by honey on Dec 15, 2006 11:30:02 GMT 5.5
nice shayeri....keep it up...
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Post by anshupawan on Dec 20, 2006 23:51:56 GMT 5.5
I had sent this to my friends .one of them has written a beautiful second para.here it is:
IAbhi to meri asali udaan baaki hai, Abhi to bahut se imtihan baaki hai, Abhi tak to meina zameen dekhi hai, Abhi to pura aasmaan baaki hai!!!
Zindgi ke is safar mein ek nishan abhi baki hai,
Suraj to dekh liya chaand abhi baki hai,
Uunchaiyo ko choone ki ichcha to hai par mukaam abhi baki hai,
Abhi tak to meina zameen dekhi hai, Abhi to pura aasmaan baaki hai!!!
These lines have been written by parjit bhatia
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Post by khushoo on Dec 21, 2006 18:19:38 GMT 5.5
hi anshupawan thx a lot for sharing this sharyi to ur frd and ur frds second para over here. i would like to pay my special regards to parjeet for writing such a gr8 para and i wish he keeps on writing more and more para and this sharyi becomes a gud poem . once again thx a lot to both of u.
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Post by Saurabh Jain on Dec 21, 2006 18:59:53 GMT 5.5
Hats off to first khushoo then Anshu and then to parjit bhatia sachhi me maza aa gayaaaa lines hi itni achhi hein
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